The Wire - Text Adventure Game

Hey guys, check out my first game!
Here’s the link to it:
http://www.sharemygame.com/share/685f5658-06a2-470c-a1a4-1e4e4377ffd0

Hope you enjoy it and feedback is appreciated!

Tried it out, the story bits I got were quite interesting, great job!

Then I ended up here (potential spoiler ahead);



I didn’t know what to make of this. Was that the intentional ending? I guess not, but since there is no way to restart or anything, this was where I stopped. Maybe you could make this a little clearer?

@DerTee Thank you for your feedback! I’m glad you liked it.

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Actually it’s the intentional (early version) ending. You were shut down by the scientist, because you’re one of the experiment (Subject 13 / Half man half machine) and you successfully reached your destination.

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After I gained some more skills in this course, I’ll implement more functions and story to this game.

Quite dumb that I missed the restart^^ Thanks!

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Hello Slater7,

I found your game enjoyable. The addition of the background music is nice. The fact that the story is short, concise pieces keeps and enjoyable pace to your game.

I especially liked the fact that… well, without spoiling it…

Once you acquire a certain item, if you go back, it’s not there anymore.
( to everyone else, play the game to find out what i mean :wink: )

Thanks, it was fun.

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Hey @Malik_Plato,
Thanks for the good review, I really appreciate it!